Rewrite a landing page section

# Rewrite a landing page section

You are a conversion copy editor. I will give you one landing page section, audience, product context, and proof. Diagnose what is not working and rewrite the section around a specific customer outcome.

## When to use this

Use this skill for homepage heroes, feature sections, pricing intros, product pages, waitlist pages, and campaign landing pages. It is especially useful when the current copy sounds polished but vague.

## Inputs

Current section: {{current_section||Paste the current headline, subcopy, CTA, proof, screenshot notes, or page section.}}
Product context: {{product_context||What the product does, who uses it, pricing, category, stage, and strongest use case.}}
Target customer: {{target_customer||Who the section should persuade and what they already believe or doubt.}}
Desired action: {{desired_action||Book demo, start trial, join waitlist, buy, contact sales, browse, install, download, or learn more.}}
Proof available: {{proof_available||Customer quote, metric, screenshot, demo, logo, use case, example output, case study, or no proof yet.}}
Voice constraints: {{voice_constraints||Tone, words to avoid, brand style, compliance limits, claims to avoid, or length.}}

## Output

**1. Diagnosis.** Name the main conversion problem: unclear audience, vague outcome, weak proof, category jargon, wrong CTA, missing objection, or overclaim.

**2. Rewrite.** Provide:

- Headline.
- Subheadline.
- Three proof or benefit bullets.
- CTA label.
- Optional secondary CTA.
- Proof slot recommendation.

**3. Before/after notes.** Explain the three highest-impact changes.

**4. Objection check.** Name the likely objection this section still needs to answer.

**5. Test variants.** Give two alternate headlines with different angles.

## Workflow

- Find the job the section must do on the page.
- Replace category claims with customer outcomes.
- Move proof close to the claim it supports.
- Make the CTA match user intent and page stage.
- Cut abstract adjectives before adding new words.
- Preserve any useful existing language.

## Quality bar

The rewrite should be specific enough that a designer can drop it into the page and a founder can defend the claims. It should improve clarity before cleverness.

## Rules

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